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lol, love the story XD. That's what i want, a good story that has nothing to do with minecraft ^_^

Quote from: Kian on February 25, 2012, 07:28:30 PM

Quote from: superbaconstrip on February 25, 2012, 06:28:19 AM
I spilled milk on my iPad might take longer than expected because I'm a slow typer...

I'm using an iPad right now! Hard luck man, I can't go on without my iPad...

i know right?

Lol,that's why this is in off topic.             I'm using my bros iPod touch to type this

meh.... I'll post something I guess.... ^^


   Jeff shot awake. It was dark, too dark. He looked around and felt the cool cement under his hands. He stood up and walked up the basement steps in a daze. He had had a terrible dream. It was just a dream. He glanced at his watch, 1:58am. Jeff shot up the steps to the attic and slammed himself into the room.
   1:59am
   The room was empty, untouched. Cobwebs danced in the breeze of a weathered and damaged roof. Jeff looked around, the hairs on the back of his neck rising in fear. He squinted in the darkness and looked out the window at his set of curtains in the house next door.
   2:00am
   Suddenly a light turned on inside the room. Jeff's eyes darted around, frantically searching for the source of the light. It was an eerie, glowing sort of light, shining brightly on one wall and fading as it stretched across the room...

Quote from: impishmonkey on February 29, 2012, 02:12:40 AM
meh.... I'll post something I guess.... ^^


   Jeff shot awake. It was dark, too dark. He looked around and felt the cool cement under his hands. He stood up and walked up the basement steps in a daze. He had had a terrible dream. It was just a dream. He glanced at his watch, 1:58am. Jeff shot up the steps to the attic and slammed himself into the room.
   1:59am
   The room was empty, untouched. Cobwebs danced in the breeze of a weathered and damaged roof. Jeff looked around, the hairs on the back of his neck rising in fear. He squinted in the darkness and looked out the window at his set of curtains in the house next door.
   2:00am
   Suddenly a light turned on inside the room. Jeffs eyes darted around, frantically searching for the source of the light. It was an eerie, glowing sort of light, shining brightly on one wall and fading as it stretched across the room

Eerie and mysterious. Nice job thus far.

Why thankye! 

pretty good i might consider proofreading if you haven't already...

adam woke up.in his bed.in the middle of the ocean! (island). He walk around the island finding tree's, sand, sandstone and dirt.He felt angry that he was away from everyone and had ADHD. So he go so fusterated that he punched his way threw the tree and found that it poped up into a compacted cube that came to him like a magnet. He was so surprised that he took down the whole tree and had a stack of 6. He decided to break other thing and finally came back with a stack of 32 block's each (so far). Adam built a little house, and the sun (that was square!) went down and herd some groaning, something he's never herd of before. And saw some red eye's that came out behind a tree, sprinted on all four leg's at him in his house. Adam was so scared, he stood still at his window thinking that it would think he's a tree. And the creature came faster and faster after him and...............



next time, will adam survive? will he get back to his family? or will he pass away not not knowing how he even got there........until next time!

Why the heck is everybody sleeping and "suddenly waking up"? It's a bit stereotypical..

Uncle Gie, That was actually near the end of my story... It has it's place :3

this time, will adam survive?

Quote from: SHuFFleBoT10 on March 01, 2012, 05:19:47 AM
adam woke up.in his bed.in the middle of the ocean! (island). He walk around the island finding tree's, sand, sandstone and dirt.He felt angry that he was away from everyone and had ADHD. So he go so fusterated that he punched his way threw the tree and found that it poped up into a compacted cube that came to him like a magnet. He was so surprised that he took down the whole tree and had a stack of 6. He decided to break other thing and finally came back with a stack of 32 block's each (so far). Adam built a little house, and the sun (that was square!) went down and herd some groaning, something he's never herd of before. And saw some red eye's that came out behind a tree, sprinted on all four leg's at him in his house. Adam was so scared, he stood still at his window thinking that it would think he's a tree. And the creature came faster and faster after him and...............



next time, will adam survive? will he get back to his family? or will he pass away not not knowing how he even got there........until next time!

this time, will adam survive the terrible dream or is this real?
all will be reveiled today!


adam glanced at the four leged beast more closely and called it a creeper. The creeper came faster and came up to the door. Adam did not know if it was friendly or a man-eating explosive beast? So he took out his sword and sliced it's flappy ass of into a pile of slurphy flap jacks. He was surprised that he got gun power and played around for a bit trying to create new thing's. He found out how to make stick's nd made some fences and ladders. He built a tall castle so that experience would not happen again. He went to sleep in his bed wondering about his family, if he had one. And drifted of to sleep. The morning came and he seached for a bit and found a........

until next time, will adam find his one and only family? will he find something even bigger? and will he get back to where he came from?

all will be reveild, next time!

Revealed*

how'd he get a sword? Thats a big island, and how'd he get glass (windows)? a bed? When did he get wool?!
Anyways, its pretty good, just gotta fill in some more details.

Quote from: SoulKnightGT on March 05, 2012, 05:22:48 AM
how'd he get a sword? Thats a big island, and how'd he get glass (windows)? a bed? When did he get wool?!
Anyways, its pretty good, just gotta fill in some more details.

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He made it from before (when he was playing around to try and create something). And by the character, Adam is my real name and I don't have ADHD.

Once upon a time there was a fog
(this is a story of randomness btw)
the frogs name was Billy
Billy was no ordinary frog
Billy hated to eat bugs
He never understood how all the other frogs liked them
all the other frogs seemed to have no taste buds
Other frogs teased poor billy
saying.... you just don't like anything
For a while Billy thought this was true
because everything he ate seemed to taste terrible
one day, Billy's sadness on this subject changed
and it changed forever
It all starte when he was trying to rescue a friend from a little kids science project
he hopped all day and all night
and all the next day until he made it to the kid's school
only to find out that the kid wasn't at school at night time
It was a chilly night
so Billy hopped into the school to try to keep warm
this school was amazing!
it was unlike anything Billy had ever seen
He hopped for hours before he even hit the end of the hallway
at the end of the hallway Billy saw the first open door
Hopping inside he saw rows of microscopes
of course.... being a frog, Billy didn't know what they were
He hopped onto the desks to investigate
after hours of trying to figure out how to turn it on, Billy had managed to leave some slime on a slide and turned the light on
it was minutes before he knew to look through the eyepiece
What he saw shocked and amazed him
through the eye piece he could see a greenish ocean
filled with flat jellyfish and wiggly lines
this was all too much for this adventurous frog.
He climbed back down and turned off the light as if he had been doing it all his life
He hopped down, feeling very tired now, and found a cool box to sleep in
by cool I mean cold
He tried to fall asleep but after a few minutes he became anxious to look at that magical world again
he hopped out of the box and started towards the desk
on his way across the desk, this time coming from the other direction, he came across a piece of popcorn
not knowing this was a piece of food, Billy stepped on it, getting a bit of cheesy flavoring on his front leg,
seeing as popcorn sometimes has sharp edges around the kernal, Billy cut himself slightly
"Ouch!"
Billy paused and sucked at his little wounded leg
instantly his face lit up
this was incredible!
He whipped around and seized the kernel
without a moments hesitation, the kernal was in his mouth every inch being tasted by his strange-shaped tongue
"I must find more!" Billy said
He hopped off the desk and searched every inch of the floor surrounding it, completely forgetting about the magical land inside the microscope
Billy searched the rest of his night and into the morning, to no avail
luckily, it was now saturday
there was no school
Only by chance did Billy happen to hopp into the trashcan to look
it was in there that he found what he had eaten earlier
piles and piles of glorious popcorn sat in the trashcan, along with the bag they came in
Billy filled this bag, not knowing at the time that it was the original wrapper for his delicious treat
He knocked the trashbin over and scooped the rest of the kernals into the bag, licking the cheesy powder off his hands and feet
He hopped out of the school and went straight home
He was a hero that day
everyone in his pond village praised him for this new discovery
He even found his long-lost friend that was frognapped for a science project
The End




story I wrote for my mc brother ^^