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Not you, Impish, an ENEMY imp.

Quote from: t3dd123 on February 17, 2012, 11:22:19 PM
Not you, Impish, an ENEMY imp.

suure

ill do a story!

there once was a spirit/demon called the VORTEX that created a dragon wich was the ENDETHER dragon.The dragon got angry for what ever reason and go split into 2 dragon's by the VORTEX.The dragon's were now called END and NETHER.They each created there own world,the NETHER and the END.So the VORTEX created a world to wich is the world you start off in.

im a pretty crap writer and tell my if the story is diffent,because my friend to me this one /\

I have a really long story is that alright?

He woke up on the island, not sure of where he was, his memory was so unclear. He took a few seconds to look around, he walked around, after stumbling a little, went up to a tree, and for whatever reason felt the over whelming urge to punch it. He wasn't angry at all, he just had a feeling that that tree had something to do with him. He threw a couple of punches and surprisingly enough it broke, imploded, and compacted into a cube. He seemed to have a gravitational pull to the cube as if he were a part of it. Within a couple seconds he had harvested most of the tree, except the leaves which he had thought little of. He repeated the process until he thought he had enough to survive. He had about 30 to 40 wood blocks he knew that wasn't enough to make an adequate shelter. He thought pretty hard on what supplies his first thought, wood planks he thought about them really hard. With the wood in his hand he pushed it into his chest, it was a painful process, but he knew he would have to get used to it in order to survive...
He had done it he had enough wooden planks to go the night...


                                                       To be continued...

dam, i suck at stories

*pats on the back* it's okay. Some people just have different writing styles, maybe you haven't found yours yet.

Quote from: impishmonkey on February 24, 2012, 09:23:23 PM
*pats on the back* it's okay. Some people just have different writing styles, maybe you haven't found yours yet.

I think shuffle had a good start to his story. it needs slightly more detail, though. Also, it seems like he is taking a "mythical approach" where you tell the story of how the world and what we know of it came to be (thus minecraft had mythical gods/creatures that created it). Maybe he could provide us with some "minecraft mythology concept" as to how the whole minecraft world was created.

It's a really cool concept and it would be nice if it was expanded . Mythology stories are one of my most favorite reads, its just so interesting.

@superbaconstrip, like all minecraft stories, your story is very interesting. The way he lands mysteriously on some island, memory wiped and unsure what to do, except listen to his natural instinct. Maybe we can see a development of character and eventually have him remember what happened and who he was. Maybe along the way, he finds another who he works with to survive. Hope to see more chapters .

well me, DJ and bacon could write a minecraft storie (a really long one).About 3 pages long all about idea's of how you got to the place/world you begin in,and we could have a vote to see who come's up with the best storie.

Quote from: SHuFFleBoT10 on February 24, 2012, 11:53:25 PM
well me, DJ and bacon could write a minecraft storie (a really long one).About 3 pages long all about idea's of how you got to the place/world you begin in,and we could have a vote to see who come's up with the best storie.

Perhaps.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t0eqSgkDuW0&feature=player_embedded

Quote from: SHuFFleBoT10 on February 24, 2012, 11:53:25 PM
well me, DJ and bacon could write a minecraft storie (a really long one).About 3 pages long all about idea's of how you got to the place/world you begin in,and we could have a vote to see who come's up with the best storie.

Pretty legitimate idea shuffle ill get working on some of it ill need your guys emails though...

sure, ill get to work too then.

I spilled milk on my iPad might take longer than expected because I'm a slow typer...

Once upon a time, there was an anthropomorphic bacon strip. He was drinking milk one morning while playing on his iPad, when suddenly the neighbor's pet dog ran in from an open door. The dog seemed very hungry for food and barked so furiously, that Mr. Bacon strip dropped his milk. The milk glass shattered and the liquid flowed onto the nearby iPad. He watched the iPad short circuit and he screamed "NOOO!". Mr. Bacon Strip started to run around the house attempting to avoid the vicious, hungry dog. He attempted to scare it away by making faces or throwing stuff in its way, but to no avail. At some point, an idea struck him. He stopped and peeled off a piece of his bacon strip body and had the dog follow him. He went to his front door and opened it. As he threw the bacon strip outside, the dog ran furiously after it, tongue hanging out of its mouth. Mr. Bacon Strip quickly shut the door, happy his plan had worked. "Mangy mutt", said Mr. Bacon. He walked back into his kitchen to survey the damage done to his beloved iPad. He cleaned up the milk and gently scrubbed out the milk on his iPad. He attempted to turn his iPad back on but it seemed "he" was gone. Fearing its death, he called up the "Geek Squad" to see what they could do to his best pal. They came within an hour with a mini stretcher in their hands as they carefully placed the injured iPad. Mr. Bacon Strip followed, sad that such a tragic accident could occur to his best friend. He realized the attendants put him on life support as soon as they entered the ambulance, its heartbeat shown to still be pulsing. "Is there anything we can do, docs? I don't want to lose my best pal", said he. One attendant responded that, "It's injuries are critical from the milk and it would be a miracle if it manages to survive". As they drove quickly to the customer support in "Geek Squad" hospital, he cried as he sat next to "Li'l Mac" in the ambulance. When they reached their destination, they pulled out Li'l Mac, placed him on a gurney and rushed him inside. A crowd of tech doctors rushed towards it to see what they could do as they placed it in a room. Mr. Bacon Strip was asked to wait outside until they could determine how to fix up the injured iPad. Within a few minutes, Mr. Bacon Strip heard heavy commotion and ran in to check what was wrong. The iPad had hit a flatline and a tech doctor quickly grabbed a Defibrillator and shouted "Clear!" as he shocked the iPad. Mr. Bacon Strip watched in agony as the tech doctor repeated the process over and over again. Mr. Bacon Strip broke through the crowd of doctors and rushed to Li'l Mac's side. "NO! You can't die on me! Please!", yelled Bacon Strip. The doctors grabbed him by the arms and attempted to move him away, so that the patient could be attended to. "I am not leaving it!", yelled a now angry and determined Bacon.

To be continued.....

Will the iPad survive? Will it die? Will Mr. Bacon Strip ever be the same without his best pal? Find out next chapter!

Quote from: superbaconstrip on February 25, 2012, 06:28:19 AM
I spilled milk on my iPad might take longer than expected because I'm a slow typer...

I'm using an iPad right now! Hard luck man, I can't go on without my iPad...