Opticraft Community

Ingame name:Startrek10
Date Joined:November 29, 2011
Discription of creations:A gumball machine, Super Mario Mushroom house,A castle Hotel
What worlds are the creations on:the GB machine And mushroom-Guest  the CH member
Links to screen shots: http://i1170.photobucket.com/albums/r525/Startrek9/untitled.jpg http://i1170.photobucket.com/albums/r525/Startrek9/CastlePlaza.jpg http://i1170.photobucket.com/albums/r525/Startrek9/Supermario.jpg
Names of players the helped:None
Current rank:Recruit
Extra Info:Took 6hrs to create all of em and i have full confidence i did well
Do you agree with our terms(http://www.opticraft.net/index.php?topic=3.0) ?:Yes i fully agree and understand

Rejected. I very much liked the gumball machine. The mushroom was also nice. I think you need more detailed builds like the gumball machine. Maybe less straight lines and less one material builds.

These builds are certainly an improvement, but they're still not the quality needed. Take some time to make a very detailed build. If you built thise in six hours it should take a few days to build something of the caliber I'm talking about. (It took me four months to get builder )
Rejected.

Edit: logan beat me to it, but I'll still post this fo the advice.