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BenjaminBun's Builder application V2 (Revised!)
« on: April 18, 2015, 05:08:46 pm »
title: Builder Application - BenjaminBun V2

Ingame name:Ben_Da_Builder
Join date: 18-01-2015
Briefly describe all your creations: I started a city in recruit 5 then it was moved to 6 for more space, The city has grown hugely and now has 13 different buildings including leisure centres, apartments, skyscrapers, Houses and many more. It is conveniently located on the west side of recruit 6's spawn. you cannot miss it.
What world/s are the creations on: Recruit 6
Links to screen shots of the creation: http://tinypic.com/r/f3ulq0/8
 http://tinypic.com/r/akd5dh/8  http://tinypic.com/r/2hhli0y/8  http://tinypic.com/r/104f1i1/8  http://tinypic.com/r/eu0mcp/8  http://tinypic.com/r/o5x4bo/8  http://tinypic.com/r/2vj292x/8  http://tinypic.com/r/vngg2o/8
Names of players who helped contribute: Craftgamer123 (ssa building and walls on mayors house) _WindowCleaner_ (walls on quartz and black glass skyscraper) All the residents of Spencer and Jackson towers (building their apartments) Myself (Majority of city)
Extra (Anything else you want to mention): I have enjoyed the project so much and i will continue adding to this. Thanks so much to all the players that contributed.
Ben


V2: I have Completed the road system and the airport and i have added an industrial hamlet at the of Markington Way.
    industrial hamlet screenshots: www.tinypic.com/r/s1kw2a/8 www.tinypic.com/r/10rtg1v/8    www.tinypic.com/r/nxmjcn/8  www.tinypic.com/r/fjl37d/8 
 
Thanks, Ben 
PS: Does this help?  ???

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Re: BenjaminBun's Builder application V2 (Revised!)
« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2015, 05:23:33 pm »
You've made a great start. The city itself is very large with a few different structures. However, I would look into adding the details now, you have the baseline structures, but quite a few of them are without interior. Not only that, i'd look into narrowing down the smaller details such as down on the streets. Street lights, Cars etc. For the Builder rank this is the sort of attention to detail required. As a sidenote, i'd try and make the buildings solely done by you in the future, to keep things easier in terms of getting a rank.

Keep going though, but for now, rejected.  
« Last Edit: April 18, 2015, 05:28:26 pm by Matthius »

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Re: BenjaminBun's Builder application V2 (Revised!)
« Reply #2 on: April 18, 2015, 05:25:51 pm »
ok then

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Re: BenjaminBun's Builder application V2 (Revised!)
« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2015, 05:35:24 pm »
goodbye opticraft. that was my final chance. one day i might come again  :-\ :-\ for now goodbye friends

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Re: BenjaminBun's Builder application V2 (Revised!)
« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2015, 05:38:20 pm »
Opticraft is about building and being part of the community, not ranking up. But if you feel you must leave, I won't stop you. We will hope to see you back one day. Good luck with what you go into next.
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