Promotional Opticraft Video - (currently in progress)

Started by Mattkkk12345, October 31, 2013, 08:57:57 PM

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Awesomedude782

All education does is teach you that learning is bad.

Mattkkk12345

Thanks for your feedback guys, I have taken it into consideration and will hopefully focus on builds for the remainder of the video, but I will be keeping the song tough  :P

ChocolateChloe17


daniblue182


The selfie that made nick change spawn.

Mattkkk12345

Well guys, thanks for the compliments and things I can improve on, I have taken them into consideration and edited some of the video. From now on in the video I will try and get more footage of builds and perhaps get footage from /fly from a willing mod although this may be complicated. I have chosen to keep the song as the footage already made fits with the song.
Thanks Guys

- Mattkkk12345  :)

ChocolateChloe17


Awesomedude782

My brother has a bear that he calls "Fluffy".
He likes to say "Were up all night to get fluffy"
All education does is teach you that learning is bad.

Mr_Mr_Mr

Here's a critique of it:
It looks very amateur, the song, the transitions, the clips. The song: It doesn't really fit the video, it seems like you just slapped on some song that was on your hard drive perhaps you can find something that fits better. The transitions between clips: they seem random and they just pop to another clip, there is no blend or order it seems. The clips: It just looks like you're walking around following a person play the game, instead give examples of what opticraft is, that doesn't necessarily mean go around and look at all the buildings, show them the experience they'd get it they were to be on opticraft. For example, show them the market, examples of how staff are great here, or examples of how the community is great.

I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.

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ChocolateChloe17

Quote from: Mr_Mr_Mr on November 13, 2013, 05:39:24 AM

I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.


That is very true lol!

icooliam

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Quote from: Mr_Mr_Mr on November 13, 2013, 05:39:24 AM
Here's a critique of it:
It looks very amateur, the song, the transitions, the clips. The song: It doesn't really fit the video, it seems like you just slapped on some song that was on your hard drive perhaps you can find something that fits better. The transitions between clips: they seem random and they just pop to another clip, there is no blend or order it seems. The clips: It just looks like you're walking around following a person play the game, instead give examples of what opticraft is, that doesn't necessarily mean go around and look at all the buildings, show them the experience they'd get it they were to be on opticraft. For example, show them the market, examples of how staff are great here, or examples of how the community is great.

I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.

Heres a tip Matt: Good recording, but change the video content and add a different song, maybe something minecrafty
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Freekkiller

Quote from: Mr_Mr_Mr on November 13, 2013, 05:39:24 AM
Here's a critique of it:
It looks very amateur, the song, the transitions, the clips. The song: It doesn't really fit the video, it seems like you just slapped on some song that was on your hard drive perhaps you can find something that fits better. The transitions between clips: they seem random and they just pop to another clip, there is no blend or order it seems. The clips: It just looks like you're walking around following a person play the game, instead give examples of what opticraft is, that doesn't necessarily mean go around and look at all the buildings, show them the experience they'd get it they were to be on opticraft. For example, show them the market, examples of how staff are great here, or examples of how the community is great.

I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.

Absolutely agree! You read my mind :)

Also, your video graphic options aren't maximalized. The small render distance annoys me, just like the fast trees, fast grass etc. It might be me, because I am used to playing with the best settings and a HD texture pack.

Mattkkk12345

xD, sorry freekkiller, my laptop is very very bad and could your reccomend a texture pack that i could use, cause at the moment i just use faithful, any ideas on a new texturepack to use for videos?


Thanks

  - Matt

frogsrock12

Very nice, very nice. I loved it!!! If you do another video, feel free to explore Hogwarts and /home frogsrock12 hogwarts
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Sugna

Guys he isn't going to change the song, look at his profile, he's obviously obsessed with it.
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Mattkkk12345

adding to woodens point, I can't be bothered to change the timings of all the footage with a new song ^_^