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poohbear199712

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[Builder] Poohbear199712
« on: July 27, 2012, 08:29:33 pm »
Ingame name:poohbear199712
Join date:01/06/12
Briefly describe all your creations: A party mansion which looks like a huge treasure chest XD, a creepy office building from the under world, and a aqua lounge
What worlds are the creations on: the mansion is in recruit 48, creepy office recruit 50 and current recruit
Links to screenshots of the creation: http://i1109.photobucket.com/albums/h432/poohbear199712/builder%20app%202/screenshot_20120727151313.png http://i1109.photobucket.com/albums/h432/poohbear199712/builder%20app%202/screenshot_20120626162809.png http://i1109.photobucket.com/albums/h432/poohbear199712/builder%20app%202/screenshot_20120626162610.png
Names of players who helped contribute: Gavin1928374655 i think
What is your current rank in Opticraft ?: recruit
Extra (Anything else you want to mention): 2nd builder app
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Re: [Builder] Poohbear199712
« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2012, 08:32:37 pm »
Hmm, this was a hard decision, but I am going to reject for now.

You use good detail and the size is pretty good, but the only "builder quality" one I am seeing is the last one. Spent about a week or two making new builds with more shape and apply again. You are a very talented builder and I'm sure you will get it with more builds.

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Re: [Builder] Poohbear199712
« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2012, 10:06:45 pm »
There was a lot of unused space in your first build that could be utilized. You could probably expand on that and integrate a couple irregular shapes into the structure. A couple of things we tend to look for are the ability to use the space available and to integrate a few irregular shapes and/ or designs into the building structure (such as circles, curves, angled slopes, etc).