Cereal_Box's Builder Request Revisited

[cereal_box]

Ingame name: Cereal_Box
Join date: Thursday 9th June 2011
Briefly describe all your creations: The Incredi-structure, Incredi-underwater-adventure, Cereal's Breakfast Adventure
What worlds are the creations on: The Incredi-structure and Incredi-Underwater-Adventure are both located in Recruit
Links to screenshots of the creation:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9VGiFgd2P0w
Names of players who helped contribute: None
What is your current rank in Opticraft ?: Recruit
Extra (Anything else you want to mention): Constructive critisizm whether I do or do not make the cut.
Do you agree with our terms(http://www.opticraft.net/index.php?topic=3.0) ?: Yes

[cereal_box]

On a side note, since none of the OP's were willing to come out and actually visit the place upon request, the screenshots I provided did not do any of my constructions justice.

[Xeadin]

Well, your incredi-structure is nice, and I like the creativity in your cereal box, however I would like to see just a tad more quality and effort put forth in your builds.

You have the right ideas. Now apply them to make something unique-- something that challenges the mind a little. Play around with some ideas and apply what you have learned here into a project worth more than words.

Rejected for now. Now let's see what you can do!