[BUILDER] XpLoZzIv

[Llyrrr (XpLo)]

Ingame name: XpLoZzIv
Join date: Around the 20th of August
Briefly describe all your creations: I've made a Large fort that took my days too do
What worlds are the creations on: J Recruit
Links to screenshots of the creation: http://s1222.photobucket.com/albums/dd493/XpLoZzIvHD/?action=view&current=myfort.jpg# keep on scrolling backwards for the next 8 pics
Names of players who helped contribute: MR_MR_MR  MissTheSofie
What is your current rank in Opticraft ?: Recruit
Extra (Anything else you want to mention): Thanks a lot to mr mr mr for moving a large build where i started to build and miss the sofie for helping me make the never ending 2 brick floor.
Do you agree with our terms(http://www.opticraft.net/index.php?topic=3.0) ?: yes i do

[Llyrrr (XpLo)]

a strong felling of fail has just hit me xD

[Luminaeus]

All of your builds are recruit level... none of them really pop out as builder+ quality. This app will be rejected.

My suggestion: Forget about these small builds and move forward as an artist. Study the building techniques of the best builders & crafters. Examine small segments of detail and take detailed notes on paper. Consider the usage of the primary elements of art: Line, shape, space, texture, form, value.

And most importantly, shun flat surfaces. The ideal is to transform flat, square Minecraft into flowing, organic works of art.

[Llyrrr (XpLo)]

okay lumi thanks for the tip il get to work now after i examine other accepted apps work

[Llyrrr (XpLo)]

ahhh....okay this is stressing now.....

[Mr_Mr_Mr]

Rejected.
Great advise jelly.