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Title: Builder Application - Leafolozzy
Post by: Leafolozzy on March 13, 2016, 04:28:20 pm

Ingame name: leafolozzy

Join date: January 18, 2015

Briefly describe all your creations:
          1. A desert mosque
          2. A Japanese Pagoda
          3. An arctic fort
          4. A bombed ship on an island
What world/s are the creations on:
          1. Guest 2 (/home leafolozzy:a)
          2. Recruit 2 (/home leafolozzy:b)
          3. Event 2 (/home leafolozzy:c)
          4. Recruit 5 (/home leafolozzy:d)
Links to screenshots of the creation:
          Google doc: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1eA91z5iWqGxkWFGgkzCKIguwV6LZnaBhKrD7O2rwHjM/edit?usp=sharing
Names of players who helped contribute: none
Extra (Anything else you want to mention): The first build was my recruit build. However, it was drastically changed (i.e. interior, roof, etc.) My fourth build was inspired by people who repeatedly griefed my build in the past.

Title: Re: Builder Application - Leafolozzy
Post by: Leafolozzy on March 13, 2016, 04:32:18 pm

edit: ignore the incomplete structure on the terrain. That is for a different project. I only want the boat to be graded. thank you again!

Title: Re: Builder Application - Leafolozzy
Post by: 100penguin. on March 13, 2016, 05:17:02 pm

Rejected

This was an interesting application:

+ Good variety of build sizes and styles
+ Nice use of materials throughout including new 1.9 stuff
- Reusing old builds - personally I don't recommend it, as it gets complicated, and can be difficult to judge the amount of improvement made
- Lack of interior - a real problem, however you did manage to make most of your builds quite detailed inside

Please continue to build though leaf, this application is very close, and can really do with development. Good luck next time :D