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Title: Crafter Application - TheWholeLoaf
Post by: TheWholeLoaf on September 07, 2014, 06:11:45 pm
Ingame name: TheWholeLoaf

Join date: January, 2012

Briefly describe all your creations: Mix of nature and civilization with custom terrain.
Link to the rest of my builds.
http://www.opticraft.net/index.php/topic,19777.0.html

What world/s are the creations on: Builder   /home TheWholeLoaf:sanctuary

Links to screenshots of the creation:

(https://www.opticraft.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1149.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fo593%2FTheWholeLoaf%2F2014-09-07_135714_zps65f97b45.png&hash=26037904adf137e31343df5adf9ae867) (http://s1149.photobucket.com/user/TheWholeLoaf/media/2014-09-07_135714_zps65f97b45.png.html)

(https://www.opticraft.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1149.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fo593%2FTheWholeLoaf%2F2014-09-07_135725_zps3861e8b4.png&hash=d27d11af79a1ca5ff682ff7c0c63d493) (http://s1149.photobucket.com/user/TheWholeLoaf/media/2014-09-07_135725_zps3861e8b4.png.html)

(https://www.opticraft.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1149.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fo593%2FTheWholeLoaf%2F2014-09-07_135744_zpsb6e38dc6.png&hash=45a65b4e0b1751957bb1cc9c871753db) (http://s1149.photobucket.com/user/TheWholeLoaf/media/2014-09-07_135744_zpsb6e38dc6.png.html)

(https://www.opticraft.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1149.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fo593%2FTheWholeLoaf%2F2014-09-07_135810_zps7d5448c8.png&hash=f7feb0de3828e1af3372a943aee83907) (http://s1149.photobucket.com/user/TheWholeLoaf/media/2014-09-07_135810_zps7d5448c8.png.html)

Extra (Anything else you want to mention): twas fun.

Thank you,
Loaf
Title: Re: Crafter Application - TheWholeLoaf
Post by: Rezathin (Logan5353) on September 07, 2014, 06:23:31 pm
Looks good mate. I hope you get this.
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Title: Re: Crafter Application - TheWholeLoaf
Post by: UnknownHedgehog on September 07, 2014, 08:32:07 pm
Rejected. The tree is really good. However, the rest of the build is rather simplistic with small buildings that are empty.

Also, with Builder apps, it's usually good to have multiple builds in an application. With Crafter, this is pretty much required. You'll need to do many builds that truly prove your skill. Builds that are massive and utilize a wide variety of intricate shapes with very close attention to detail. Whether it be structures or organic builds. The tree is a good step, but there's still a long road ahead for Crafter.