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Discussion forum => Applications => Classic => Archives => Rejected => Topic started by: Destroy8r9 on November 27, 2011, 07:52:17 am

Title: Builder Destroy8r9
Post by: Destroy8r9 on November 27, 2011, 07:52:17 am
Ingame name:Destroy8r9
Join date:
Briefly describe all your creations:a multi level office complex
a pyrimad with temple for a entrracne and watrer elevator to the top
a cone shaped building
a litte temple
a little pyrimiad with a a little arnea
2 guardian obsidian pryimads
a failed sphere
and a runined castle
What worlds are the creations on:sphere pyrimads temple on recruit 26 castle on recruit 28 and office complkex and cone on current recruit world
Links to screenshots of the creation:http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/Destroy8r9/screenshot_20111127183558.png
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/Destroy8r9/screenshot_20111127183538.png
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/Destroy8r9/screenshot_20111127183525.png
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/Destroy8r9/screenshot_20111125190341.png
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/Destroy8r9/screenshot_20111125190326.png
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/Destroy8r9/screenshot_20111004155759.png
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/Destroy8r9/screenshot_20111004155846.png
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/Destroy8r9/screenshot_20111004155708.png
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/Destroy8r9/screenshot_20111004155731.png
Names of players who helped contribute:none
What is your current rank in Opticraft ?: recruit
Extra (Anything else you want to mention):since last time i have been trying to use more circles
Do you agree with our terms(http://www.opticraft.net/index.php?topic=3.0) ?:yes
Title: Re: Builder Destroy8r9
Post by: SoulKnightGT on November 27, 2011, 08:11:15 am
Im sorry to say, these aren`t enough.
Don`t get me wrong, they`re good, but not Builder good. But i see you put alot of time in the first picture. (top one)

What we`re looking for are different 3D shapes that are original, or never seen on Opticraft.
Like, I don`t know...a cube with a sphere kinda sticking out, with saturns rings around it? :D

What you are lacking: Detail. We want detail. Try layers on layers?
Different colors?

Look in old builder worlds, or even other worlds.Theres some good ones ;) Look at peoples accepted Builder applications.

Sadly, Rejected. (Wait three days till next builder application.)