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Discussion forum => Applications => Classic => Archives => Rejected => Topic started by: Owlgirl66 on August 01, 2012, 11:45:17 pm
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Ingame Name: Owlgirl66
Join Date: March 1, 2012
What Worlds Are The Creations On: Recruit 51, Recruit 49, Recruit 48
Links To The Screenshots Of The Creations: http://imgur.com/RMeGZ,5wWoO,xfdZx
Names Of The Players Who Helped Contribute: Nobody helped me on any of my builds that are posted
What Is Your Current Rank In Opticraft: Recruit
Extras(Anything Else You Want To Metion): I think I will make a very good builder. I will help others and work hard to earn other ranks
Do You Agree To Our Terms(http://www.opticraft.net/index.php?topic=3.0)?: Yes I do
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post more images, it only shows the front views of the builds and good luck ;)
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post more images, it only shows the front views of the builds and good luck ;)
Thanks
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Hmm, there are some good builds in here but I think you can add more. You used great detail in your mansion (I have seen these ingame, it would be hard to judge just by the photos) and it was nicely designed. These are nice, however you just made three houses. On almost every accepted builder app there are more than 5 builds. I suggest adding more builds (2 or more) and trying again in a week or two.
Another thing I would like to mention is the fact that these builds are medium-small. While it is ok to have some small builds, you must also have larger,more detailed builds. Your mansion has nice shape but the other two houses are a little lacking in that. Make sure to add circles,curved lines, angles etc. to your future builds. If you need help with circles here is the chart (http://www.google.com/imgres?um=1&hl=en&sa=N&rlz=1C1CHFX_enUS472US472&biw=1366&bih=643&tbm=isch&tbnid=KhLsRXR5UBDjPM:&imgrefurl=http://mconstuct.wikia.com/wiki/Circle_Chart&docid=3RqcoJgvEHnI7M&imgurl=http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb57087/mconstuct/images/e/e9/Basic_circular_tower_layouts.png&w=894&h=909&ei=4sIZUNGqIIXt0gGhmYGgDw&zoom=1) that started me off.
Rejected for now. You are a talented builder and I am sure you will get this soon!