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Opticraft promotional video/ pictures?
Nyssa:
--- Quote from: Xeadin on January 17, 2012, 08:50:27 am ---Well, since I had the freetime to do so, here's my video for the opticraft server. I got all that I could into it, as I didn't want to make it too long.
I think that comparing videos might not sound so bad :)
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It's cool, I like it.
Spamarian:
I have supported before the idea, and any promotional way for that server. it deserves it.
Littleevilwolf:
i feel like making this video :3 -woots-
DeeKay:
After seeing yours I just had to give it a go! ;D
So heres mine! Tell me what you think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ho-D32IBTk
(Also I made a new topic with your and my video, hope thats ok)
Spamarian:
--- Quote from: xDeeKay on January 17, 2012, 03:14:36 pm ---After seeing yours I just had to give it a go! ;D
So heres mine! Tell me what you think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ho-D32IBTk
(Also I made a new topic with your and my video, hope thats ok)
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I have some suggestions to improve it.
1) You need (!) and no (.) at your sentences.
2) When you say "shop" I believe it should show us the market from the stand point in the entrance and no the roof. That's really bad.
3) When you show us the warp town, show them all. No just one.
4) When you say: "Make a town" Will we make the town? No! Visit the 4 towns, I believe tis better because they didnt build that town.
5) Finally, the end is bad, because you should have the "IP" and the rest, the "site", and the name. With that, "Opticraft. Smp. opticraft.net" you confuse them..
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