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Promotional Opticraft Video - (currently in progress)
ChocolateChloe17:
Oh btw Matt, so far so good!
Awesomedude782:
My brother has a bear that he calls "Fluffy".
He likes to say "Were up all night to get fluffy"
Mr_Mr_Mr:
Here's a critique of it:
It looks very amateur, the song, the transitions, the clips. The song: It doesn't really fit the video, it seems like you just slapped on some song that was on your hard drive perhaps you can find something that fits better. The transitions between clips: they seem random and they just pop to another clip, there is no blend or order it seems. The clips: It just looks like you're walking around following a person play the game, instead give examples of what opticraft is, that doesn't necessarily mean go around and look at all the buildings, show them the experience they'd get it they were to be on opticraft. For example, show them the market, examples of how staff are great here, or examples of how the community is great.
I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.
ChocolateChloe17:
--- Quote from: Mr_Mr_Mr on November 13, 2013, 05:39:24 am ---
I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.
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That is very true lol!
icooliam:
--- Quote from: FNVcourierjon on November 01, 2013, 11:44:19 am ---My eyes are bleeding.
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My eyes and ears are bleeding...
--- Quote from: Mr_Mr_Mr on November 13, 2013, 05:39:24 am ---Here's a critique of it:
It looks very amateur, the song, the transitions, the clips. The song: It doesn't really fit the video, it seems like you just slapped on some song that was on your hard drive perhaps you can find something that fits better. The transitions between clips: they seem random and they just pop to another clip, there is no blend or order it seems. The clips: It just looks like you're walking around following a person play the game, instead give examples of what opticraft is, that doesn't necessarily mean go around and look at all the buildings, show them the experience they'd get it they were to be on opticraft. For example, show them the market, examples of how staff are great here, or examples of how the community is great.
I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.
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Heres a tip Matt: Good recording, but change the video content and add a different song, maybe something minecrafty
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