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RuthlessTomato

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another very long storytime!(pro writers edition)
« on: December 19, 2012, 11:55:14 pm »
Yesh yesh, ik caz has a post just like this. You lead on from the last persons post. Blah blah. But this is for pro writers who are willing to write close to a paragraph. DONT POST IF YOU DONT FEEL YOURE A GOOD ENOUGH WRITER. PLEASE.
i shall start:
Tom was surrounded. Five assassins, all out to kill him, had now trapped him. With their knives drawing closer, Tom stepped back until his leather jacket smashed against a brick wall. Even though he was unarmed, Tom could decimate the immediate faction with ease. It was the snipers positioned on the rooftop with their crosshairs on his eyeball that worried him. Suddenly, tom had a very rash idea that would probably get him killed, but it was his 1 shot. He took action.

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Re: another very long storytime!(pro writers edition)
« Reply #1 on: December 20, 2012, 04:04:52 am »
Born and raised by a quick-witted cop, Tom was not oblivious to crime. Poor kid was often found seated in the dreary administration office of his school, punished for his callow actions. Puerility runs in his family, for Tom's crude brother was often the source of Tom's immature actions. Tom knew his corrupt brother had something to do with these assassins.
"You work for Alex don't you all?" Tom shouted. The assassins looked astounded. Tom disguised as a surrender, by placing his innocent hands behind his head then slowly turning around with his forehead against the wall. The assassins looked befuddled then slowly lowered their knives to their thighs. Tom eye-balled his escape route, took a step to his right, and ran like no other.

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Re: another very long storytime!(pro writers edition)
« Reply #2 on: December 20, 2012, 07:57:12 am »
I'd participate... But story-line is meh :/
Didn't enjoy the Bourne dominion-styled story.
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Re: another very long storytime!(pro writers edition)
« Reply #3 on: December 20, 2012, 11:57:26 am »
Fine then. Ill make it better.
Sprinting at full strength, tom caught up to his team.
"Where have you been?" was the question of all 30 mouths present.
"Nowhere, lets get going" tom said.
"We have a larger force to take care of."

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Re: another very long storytime!(pro writers edition)
« Reply #4 on: December 21, 2012, 02:10:45 am »
"No we don't!"
"Yes we do."
"No"
"Yes"
"No"
"Yes"
"No"
"Yes"
"No"
"Yes"
1 million billion years later:
"No"
"Yes"
"No"
"Yes"
"No"
"Yes"


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Re: another very long storytime!(pro writers edition)
« Reply #5 on: December 21, 2012, 02:39:52 am »
I like kag's story.
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