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My First Builder Application!

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tribalturtle:
Ingame name: zeldalove1998x
Join date: April 10, 2012
Briefly describe all your creations: I made a mansion with 11 rooms (not including stair-room and elevator), a nightclub with a bar and large dancefloor, and a lake cabin .
What worlds are the creations on:  Mansion : /j recruit45 . Nightclub & Lake Cabin : Current Recruit ( /j recruit46)
Links to screenshots of the creation: Mansion : http://imgur.com/Gh5mB , http://imgur.com/s0qmz   Nightclub : http://imgur.com/2Hbuw , http://imgur.com/uOGvm ,  http://imgur.com/2mPde   Lake Cabin : http://imgur.com/6L69z , http://imgur.com/pdKPH
What is your current rank in Opticraft ?: Recruit.

SoulKnightGT:
I'm sorry, but at the moment these are not Builder worthy. But I do like the Lake Cabin.
Look at old Builder worlds, or even some Accepted Builder Applications.
Also, try some different shapes, odd- like ones. And try adding layers?
Rejected.

EliteDelta:
Your builds have nice detail, yet they lack good size. Try to add a few more things that have the same detail, large sizes, and like Soul said, builder quality.

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